I got 12 (A+)on the final research paper for my Inquiry course as the only one international student (ESL) among the very few local students who received the full mark.In the midterm, I was thinking about withdrawing from this course as I was afraid that it would pull back my GPA…..yet finally I decided to stay with it for the sake of the tuition unrefundable….Now,looking back upon… it seems to be one of the very few best decision I’ve made in those months passed by. Here I attached the comments sent by my professor Dr.Ralph.I appreciate his encouragement and the precious experience in the interactive course as well.Tomorrow is the psychology final….another course I value most around this term….and then the Linear Algebra on 12/13,and then Microeconomics on12/14…..I’ll be back to life around midnight on 12/14,hopefully…
Luck with all my friends as well as myself!
You have organized a well-written and well-argued paper. You brought strong sources to bear upon your research interest. You provide excellent solutions and conclusions. You did a good job of linking your theme to the theme of the Inquiry course.
You made good use of charts to emphasize your points. You interpreted the graphs well.
You used a wide range of sources, including a preponderance of peer-reviewed journals. You almost have it for the APA referencing style. I made some minor corrections.
Your word count was 3,482, slightly over the limit, but fine.
It was a pleasure having you in the course. All the best in your future pursuits.
When news media constructs news about violent crime, whether the frequent negative portrayals of racial groups represent the reality or the racial bias?
Professor –Dr.Ralph Brown
Course Code –Inquiry 1SS3 (C02)
Date Submitted –November 29, 2006
By : Zhiying Xiao